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Post by ratos on Feb 1, 2010 23:16:50 GMT -5
Am I true? Am I wise? Am I real in your eyes? Why must I be just as thee. with my heart gripped in your hateful vice? I am not your puppet, so do not try to make me so . Or else this world I will abandon, and leave you here all alone.
Just something I wrote out of the blue.
A little Emo, I know. But I think it's ok.
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Post by ~L~ on Feb 2, 2010 15:28:59 GMT -5
It's pretty good, in my humble opinion. It brings reflections to mind.
I'm more of a free-form poet at heart, so I tried to bar my own bias as best I could to make a comment.
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Post by ratos on Feb 22, 2010 22:54:42 GMT -5
"Silver rounds, silver rounds All around, all around Pierce the night and bring the beast To the ground to the ground."
Something I made up while I was watching The Wolfman.
And thanks for commenting ~L~. I can't think of who you are but thank you.
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